Right then, this is the coloured piece of when the umbrella escapes from his hands, I like the swishing and overlapping of the tie and blazer, think it works well. I recently showed this to Paul and Neil, they said it's fine but the hip needed to swing out a little more. I agree, and so if there's time after the credits and sound I'll be coming back to change it.

I think in the actual film we're going to cut a few frames at the beginning (until you see the umbrella)